Monday, March 17, 2008

Day Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am lying on my stomach,
on the warm tropic sand.
Revelling in the caress,
of my lovers hand,
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Tango
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 08 April 2009

A nice carefree write...hear the ocean and the gulls-had to laugh, as I woke in the same place, with sand in my eyes.. You enjoyed Bliss....Cindy

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Emancipation Planz 17 March 2008

I smiled too Tango.... hearing the sounds of tropical paradise is dreamy and you have conveyed this well... I am ready to sail off to this island

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