Sunday, October 25, 2020

Day Dream Comments

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I often thought I would grew it out
Wake up one day and faced reality
Wake up not asleep
Not in my head nor assuming I'm still asleep
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Roshana Phillips
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Kostas Lagos 27 October 2020

Will we ever see our dreams come true? Will we keep on dreaming or will we get disappointed and quit them? Excellent poem

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Khairul Ahsan 26 October 2020

'No pain But a lot of easy gain A world where everything seems fair And I dont have to close my eyes for them to be.' - May be a day dream today, but unless we dream, we do not achieve.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 October 2020

Nice poem. Good question. How long? You got me there. Perhaps daydream until the drudgery of life hits you then you get up and go fight the demons. Dunno

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