Saturday, November 18, 2017

Day Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Day dreams are quite often,
When love is single sided.
It's a day among golden,
But truly i was blindfolded.
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Raees Ahmad
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 January 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Raees Ahmad. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 August 2018

Nothing she proved more than imagine. I bite a biscuit without cream, Oh! Alas! it proved false vision Some times it seems a day of hope, ....love pain takes decades. really a fine poem . loved reading it..... tony

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

One-sided love is nothing but anguish in the bliss of love. An insightful poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Raees.

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