Day Divided And Now Done Comments
Day divided, and now done,
The moon arose, replaced the sun
Put my tidied work to rest
Smiled at strangers, tried, at best...
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An image of gratification... even better put to rhyme.. it's a watercolor for the mind's eye! Thank you for the image of a day well spent!
What a fluent expression of thoughts! The note is superb, the last line truly absorbing. Thoroughly deserves a 10/10. You've nicely compartmentalized the day and the daily chores, and penned the actions beautifully.
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8/8/2025 12:56:15 AM # 1.0.0
How do you divide a day that's done? I wish I can do it but ideas I've none-10