Saturday, June 30, 2012

Day By Day Comments

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Day by day I lived depressed
nothing helps my miserable distress.
To say I'm fine is a lie
I don't know why I even try.
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Justin Wright
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Alex Medina 30 June 2012

Well written. There were times the rhythm faltered, though. I can really relate, especially with the last stanza.

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