Wednesday, March 2, 2022

Day Breaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

Day breaks on the beach Marina
Sun saunters over the uneven sand
Barking of the nightly dogs ceased
The girl next door complains
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Marine is just Magical! What else to say! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Marina….

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

Marina…..

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 03 March 2022

Wow so very thoughtful poem. I long to be at Marina beach, it is long since I went bare feet holding my scandals in hand to Marina beach. Excellent poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

You are welcome, Dr Nehal. We live in Chennai for the time being. And sure, Marine is so enticing.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 March 2022

I love the second line!

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 March 2022

Happy that you have taken time to read the poem and thank you for the comments

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

Marina…

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

Excellent short work dear lovable poet...5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

It feels greatly encouraging to receive wonderful comments from you Dilipji. I am honoured.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 March 2022

incredible beauty

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

I am grateful to you, LeeAnn, for the appreciation

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

So happy that you liked the poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

Marina Beach, of Chennai (erstwhile Madras) , India is the longest beach in Asia. Arguably, the most beautiful one too.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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