Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Day Breaker Comments

Rating: 5.0

In that day,
An unknown man walked slowly but surely to my place
With an intention in his mind to broke my day
Making warmth of that day be the freezing ice
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Kesav Easwaran 22 April 2009

Don't know why you let your day open to him break...intriguing write, Little...half open half veiled...and hence nice...10

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Blue Eyes 08 March 2009

i like the suspense in it, its brilliant.

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