Day Break Comments

depicts a dawning of a beautiful morning by person who is so well composed.srating para itself is stunner. 'Streaks of red, orange, yellow, Light up the sky Majestic roar of the lion The gleaming sun Start of a brand new day' voted10 surya

very nice and lovely poem. i have also written poems on sunset, sunrise etc topics/ your opening lines are catchy and nice. the flow is very smooth.