Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Day At The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water water all around
lots of beauteful, wonderful sounds
soft wind blowing leaves into the air
soft wind also blowing my hair
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Samantha Ridley
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sara }i{ 26 August 2009

wow i wish i was with you......the poem is great 10/10

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Miranda Van Yperen 09 August 2009

great poem Sam i loved it :)

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David Harris 04 August 2009

Sam, you can feel the salty spray as the wind whips up the spray from the waves. A lovely poem my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. David

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