Day And Night Comments
day and night the gravest foes
still none have seen them waging wars
leaves the day, oh the fading gleams
and the night comes with his shining stars
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A great flowing poem with much imagery.Meaningful parallel concerning day and night.A worthy piece of poetry
................they're beautiful kanav, they are BEST FRIENDS....they see each other every morning and every night :)
Great imagery, Kanav! Love how you have created this analogy between day and night and humans, very creative and imaginative! Keep on writing, I look forward to reading more of your poetry! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Great write your Day and Night. Please let me know when you post a new poem Kanav. I really admire your talent. Thank You
Human's be the glittering face, and the heart dark. Sadly, this clever poem describes the level to which the human race has stooped. A very thought provoking piece indeed.
Wow creative analogy drawn btw human natures and day n night. Kudos poet! So nice to read u again kanav.
A highly imaginative piece of poetry. Insightful and well written. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
I like the idea of your poem, and the contrasts in the last stanza.
Beautiful lines with a great ending and a thought provoking write!
........dear kanav, I hope you have a beautifull day and night.....also, congratulations on your 50th poem :) ....truly I LOVED reading every line.....you penned a wonderful poem with a great concept....it's actually mind-blowing and very, very deep....I wasn't contemplating the universe until I read this poem....truly I wish you would write more.....and thanks for this poem....it was a fabulous surprise :)
Day and night Brightness and darkness Glittering face and darker heart Are the realities and the law of Nature and would remain forever......a nice reflective poem.....Kanav
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You have beautifully juxtaposed two opposing facets of humans, a smiling face and a wicked heart and wonder if they exist as day and night - the arch enemies who stay in harmony without any open discord! This is a poem packed with meaning and full of poetic beauty! Welcome back Kanav!