Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Day And Night 2 Comments

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The sun watches the earth during the day and,
The moon takes over during the night;
With the muse of the stars playing their respective roles as well.
Daylight!
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Edward Kofi Louis
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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2015

Good one, Sun and moon both are on their respective duty. They both are serving us by the order of Almighty.....SO well thought...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2015

As the sun gives it light, To help it perform its duties during the night........moon has no own light, sun provides light to moon. So nicely depicted this fact as per the last stanza. Beautiful poem.....10

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