Tuesday, February 27, 2007

Day After The Night Before (Fun Poem) Comments

Rating: 4.3

Woke up this morning
My hair a shocking pink
Tried to do my shirt up
With a rusty cuff link
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David Harris
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Risha : Ahmed 09 May 2007

That was a really hillarious poem. I gave it a ten.

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Jim Foulk 20 April 2007

why is it we have those dumb hang overs and yet we still do it again and again. i do not drink they way i use to only one or two beers now and then. but this was a very fine write David.

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Lisa Wilkinson 30 March 2007

This poem well and truly tickled my funny bone David. It reminds me of my morning mis-hap poem which is also funny.Cheers

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Duncan Wyllie 13 March 2007

Great to see a light-hearted approach to a poem, so often we write seriously, a breath of fresh air, Thankyou for shaing it Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 04 March 2007

Then I would say you had a heck of a time, wish I was there LOLOL. A nice fun-loving poem, loved it David. A big (10) from me.--Melvina--

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Lynda Robson 01 March 2007

As one who is unable to hold her drink I can emphasise with this poem, well observed David love Lynda xx

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Dee Daffodil 28 February 2007

Funny little piece. I just read your Bio...very impressive! ! From a Canadian friend! Hugs, Dee

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Hold on... is this not completely normal? :) Fun poem indeed D, and well-penned at that. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 February 2007

Never again we cry... why do we always lie... like it david 9

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