Day Ache Comments
I like it when the day dawns, not when daylight looms ahead
And I am subjugated to the twisting of the hours
Each tearing at the space beneath my heart
Which sinks at every bell at every nod
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I agree with Raynette... good poem, but perhaps better to eliminate the last 2 words completely... adding a little bit of mystery!
I like the construct of this poem, Linda, and the opening lines, but I am not sure I like the last two words. Great title and good idea, but something seems missing, in my opinion. Raynette
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7/22/2025 10:34:34 PM # 1.0.0
A clever piece Linda, it takes me back to my school autograph book, sort of, Wheat Heat Eat At T the way you have gradually scaled it down. Nice one. Sincerely Ernestine