Hats off to the flight of imagery that produced such a deep poem in most simple and a few words.
Amazing the first catch of the word Day. Amazing! Real honor PH has offered by selecting this four lines poem of the poet. Resounding loudly through the unseen conscious....... I am Day. Metaphorically excellent.
Fantastic imagery. Nicely articulated. Day is the driver of all activity on earth. Lovely poem. Strange that it has 264 votes (average 3) and not even a single comment until this day.
Short, beautiful and yet so deep in meaning.