Thursday, April 16, 2009

Dawning Of Lovelight. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waft of blue breeze flows in, skimming my heart,
Drifting softly, - - - into the core of me.
Thick creamed viscosity slowly drowns half
My mind, tastes sweet and binds my soul with three
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Sandra Fowler 16 April 2009

A luminous, enchanting piece. I love your starlit trees. 10, from West Virginia. Love, SandraX

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Sue Sie 16 April 2009

Superb tenderly written poem.....10++ Sue

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Ency Bearis 16 April 2009

Awesome poem..great vivid write..lovely indeed....10

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Tsira Goge 16 April 2009

binds my soul with three Cords of destiny, - - and triangle marches Me, caught, toward a beckoning light. ............................................................ Fay, It's Remarkable mystery... very nice........10..... Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 16 April 2009

What a lovely write Fay...the flow of words just brings so many images to life here...Fi 10+++

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Muhammad Ali 16 April 2009

it is super very lovely poem.................10+

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 April 2009

Fay, this is so very beautiful.... Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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