Monday, January 2, 2012

Dawning Of Love Comments

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While watching the dawning of the sun this morning
As it came over the horizon,
With the warmth of light like it was smiling.
I stood there watching in Awe as I thought of you,
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craig moon
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Adeline Foster 25 January 2012

Good write here. Somehow your name seems woven into it. Read mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Crimson Love 03 January 2012

For I will NEVER harm you like so many have done, For I only wish is to see you blossom Like the dawning of a new years sun. Magnificent lines, I truly enjoy the warm feeling from this poem, superb job.

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