Dawning Beauty Comments
Within body, spirit, and soul, have I just woken up, or is this sublime?
In the bright lit wondrous skies, how angels could not surmise,
Should I believe that this will end in time?
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Very beautiful, a 10 for sure.
You have an enviable way with rhyme and word choice. I like best the descriptive passages. I also like the analogy of referring to the colors of the sky as its complexion-also relating to the complexion of the loved one.
Very good, I enjoyed this cleverly written verse. These lines really caught my eye, Hair of heaven's waters flowing, Eyes of gemstones glowing, Lips and smile of the divine, Bosoms, nooks, and bays, Brings the consuming fire to shine. It reminded me a little bit of oh so many ancient poetry that describe a woman with vivid imagination. Peace, L&T
WOW! you are seriously talented! i really liked this poem i read the first 2 lines and was blown away!
This is a very good write eloquent and flowing, thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Thad
This poem is beautiful i really liked it alot best regaurds chauntae
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7/23/2025 10:19:51 PM # 1.0.0
Great imagery in this poem and greatly expressed emotion! 10/10