Monday, September 5, 2016

Dawning Comments

Rating: 5.0

woke up in the mud
with weak limbs crawling
toward the water
too dirty to drink from
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Rob Knetsch
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2016

Opening the eyes only one can climb in water or sky. Very wise lines are drafted and shared.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

Tried to stand up! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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