Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Dawn Symphony On A Spring Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I strain my ears,
greedy
for each delicate note,
for each pianissimo dolce espressivo trill,
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Diana van den Berg
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Bob Blackwell 07 June 2009

The dawn chorus is sweet musc to my ears as well. Your Dawn poetry as Karin said is surely of the best kind. Bob Blackwell

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This is simply the best! The marriage of music and poetry is an enthralling one and this is what you have just done to me! I love every single word from beginning to end. This is poetry! You have won my heart! 10 Karin Anderson

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Yelena M. 23 March 2009

This fantastic symphony of colours, tones, undertones, pianissimos, crescendos transcends the true intention of the Music itself in your wonderful poem.I cannot stop reading this unique deliverance of the sounds expressed in words! Best wishes. A.

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Sicelo Sithole 15 March 2009

And i can't get enough of this...10+10++++

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Sicelo Sithole 02 March 2009

Mybe it is in my blood to be carried away by special lines of poetry but, n this part: 'and I lose myself in every perfect tone and semi-tone, in the sunshine-and-shadow flow from note to note, ' This is poetry. When i read your poems, i am tought new things in every way. the rich language and the use of words is very unique. You are one of the poets i know who can deliver verse like this. thank you for sharing.

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Diana van den Berg

Diana van den Berg

Durban, South Africa
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