Wednesday, August 26, 2009

.........................Dawn Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

May this dawn dry all your tears,
that were cried just yesterday.
May this dawn be joyous bright,
chasing all your cares away...
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Romeo Della Valle 11 April 2012

Wow! What powerful and well crafted write that clearly shows your great poetic writing skills and beauty filtered through this touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I really enjoyed this great write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 October 2009

a lovely song welcoming dawn.....10

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Patti Masterman 26 August 2009

Love your beautiful dawn song. (smile)

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