Tuesday, September 5, 2017

Dawn Reminder Comments

Rating: 5.0

beyond the misty lawn
the mockingbird will sing
a rain cloud waits for dawn
to see what it might bring
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Barry Middleton
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 September 2017

beneath the shadowed sod a quiet dream is heard as death has found its god in song and cloud and bird Beautiful line, nicely penned poem, A lovely poem to read as many times as the first love letter. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10++ and an invite for comments on some of my poems too. Regards. Subhas

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