Monday, April 18, 2005

Dawn Patrol (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 4.9

Big waves ten foot plus,
Fear fills my heart - board too small
Maybe tomorrow
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Scarborough Gypsy
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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Hahaaa lol, I like this

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

A great haiku! Wonderful waves!

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I write haiku, too and I spent some time on the PH forum...that is where I discover new poets and their poems for me to read..wonderful haiku about uncertainty and fear...

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Duncan Wyllie 12 March 2006

Oh, the atmosphere and power of nature.You have done us proud with this one.Love Duncan

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Richard George 26 June 2005

5-7-5... nice one.

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Lilian Marriage 04 May 2005

Well done Chris, a man of few, but GOOD, word's.

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Andy Konisberg 18 April 2005

nice one, Chris Cathersides.

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