Thursday, June 30, 2011

Dawn On The Thames Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fragile ribs of mist on the morning river
have faded to transparency.
The sun has no time for dreamy eyes
or the sorrow of dew.
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Michael Cayley
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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