Winter's now gone, so pull up a sleeve.
Springs now arrived with new air to breath.
Forget the berries and the fallen leaves
snow upon mountains and the tops of trees.
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Very nice, nice, nice! ! ! I liked this one and the subject was great. Love Ernestine XXX
This poem resonates with perfect rhythm & rhyme. It is such a joy to read aloud. The Sring-Like portrait, painted with your pen, is very vivid due to excellent description using selective words. Loved it! Deanna xx
Rosie, we seldom have much springtime here in the South, but we had a lovely one this year, and now it is cold again, so maybe we'll be blessed with another as lovely as this one. Great read! Scarlett
The four seasons captured in verse.What a wonderful concept.you have the poets gift of being able to move the spirit to greater heights.Love Duncan
You have a distinctive style, which I hope you don't mind me saying, has an almost childlike feel in places. I find this gives your work great charm, as in Dawn of Spring, and a pleasure to read. Patrick