Thursday, December 2, 2004

Dawn Of Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

When is darkness companion -
Oh sparkling twilight's
Last presence of the sun,
Yielding to the progress of time;
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Kelly Vinal
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David Gerardino 21 December 2004

I like the first part and some of the second, good job......

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James Papastamos 19 December 2004

An excellent mixture of free verse and lyric poetry. This is the type of poem that forces a reader to 'read between the lines.' Great poem! - James

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

Homestead, Florida
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