Wednesday, March 2, 2022

Dawn Of A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Awakened by a morning choir of birds,
I stretched and yawned,
On a sunny morning,
A brand new day had dawned,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Davies 12 March 2022

Thank you so much everone x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

The portrayal of image of oak tree and woodpecker makes this poem so lively. Liked your keen poetic observation of 'A brand new day'....A magnificent poem. Top score!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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