Dawn Light Comments

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Sandra, it's a brilliant poem. I liked the expression, 'vocabulary fails to express the moment' Great poetry from the wonderful poem of poetess Sandra. To my favourite!

a scintillating poem that can be appreciated in doorwerth and in peking. thanks for sharing your ladyship. take care, john

Being parted from someone dear is tinged with sadness.I feel.

There's so much meaning deep within this piece Sandra...its so touching to read....expressed by a heart of gold....wonderful poetess 10++

struck with the perfect poise every word resides in, in the telling of the poem..i admit to a bit of awe sandra.. :) tom

You have nicely crafted dawn light with you mind's eye. And nicely expressed rightly.10 from me.

Sandra, You've managed to capture the essence of inexplicable feeling. In that moment when we're filled with emotion as we stare in awe at the beauty of our world, we often make the connection between what we see and the souls of others we care for. Put into words 'as delicate as flowers'.

a wonderful poem for the dawn which i adore..speachless our poems when we try to measure that beauty which can't be measured...you said so much by admitting our failure to say when the verses apologize and bend to a beauty which can't be equalized by any verse

Dear Sandra, I like the rich facets of your feelings and warmth, they sparkle in the lines that you have written a diamond under the sunshine of love. keep on.

Many ways in fact..only differing from individual experiences.... Can love be felt...? ...like water is wet....? Thanks for sahring the experience with us Sandra. And yes...Hello! Cheers. Subroto

Many ways in fact..only differing from individual experiences.... Can love be felt...? ...like water is wet....? Thanks for sahring the experience with us Sandra. And yes...Hello! Cheers. Subroto

Sandra this poem is golden just as the sun warms the spring, lovely

Just beautiful, Sandra. You've put out the welcome mat for spring. Warm regards Ron

From one Sandra to another....undoubtedly a marvellous piece...you have brought out the wonders of spring and the hope it brings in a unique way..10+++

Your graceful warm-hearted poem was the perfect way to begin a beautiful spring day. Your elegant words draw us to the floral blooms that sing us their songs of hope.

Exquisite, Sandra. I particularly love the enigmatic multiple possibilities of the last line - you could be talking to the Dawn Light, or a single person, or all your readers.

i return to you - poetic gravity forces me. :) Your fourth line will stay in my heart forever. t x

Dawn as Yellow bird...captivating imagery, Sandra...nice poem...thanks...10

So True Sandra - words are inadequate but lovers of dawn and nature Know - and you put it out beautifully. Thank you