Saturday, August 6, 2016

Dawn Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

love does not leave without the dawn
it takes the early morning light away
and leaves us only with the day
the days are easy to endure
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2016

Even in college you wrote with depth. A heart-touching poem on the loss of love. These words ring so true.

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Sandra Feldman 06 August 2016

Oh, so true, so true, when love is gone, the dawn is gone, The sleepless nights, Where darkness, frights. Deeply touched by this intense and incredible work.

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Barry Middleton 06 August 2016

Sandra, I am so glad you liked it. Again this one was written so long ago.

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