Sunday, February 3, 2008

Dawn Creaks Open Comments

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Dawn creaks open,
splitting sky
with painful slowness;
sun sears the clouds,
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Midnight Clarity
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Original Unknown Girl 04 February 2008

My God! This is gorgeous, stunning in fact! Love the lines 'Breathe in, breathe out, the fragile heart beats faster, eyes clear to see the wonder of a sunbeam'. A joy to read. HG: -) xx

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Mary Gordley 03 February 2008

Absolutely wonderful writing. Thank you so much.

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