O! Gorgeous dawn
Shining above horizon
To you thousands of Oceanids rise
To pay homage before sunrise.
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You have inscribed about a gorgeous dawn at seashore of Puduchery so movingly where radiant rays of orange sun tear darkness away from earth and lfe abounds with colors opulent.A brilliant poem.10
BEAUTIFUL DESCRIPTION OF A DAWN I VISITED KANYA KUMARI IN 1963 OR 4 MAY BE STAYED THREE DAYS TO SEE THE SUN RISE AND MOON SET THEY SAY TIS EXQUISITE BUT THE CLOUDS REFUSE THE DARSHAN TO NON SPIRITUALIST I WILL NOW SEE FROM BEYOND HEAVEN AS AND WHEN NOW MY TIME COMES THANKS ST ji
Thank you so much dear poet poet. I too visited Kanyakumari and few famous south temples, wasn't able to catch dawn. Few of my poems came out of that experience But this is what I have come to believe now. Religion is irrelevant If it isn't part of social fabric. Spirituality is irrelevant If it is not conscious of unifying principle of Universe. God is irrelevant If we can't feel Its influence upon our life.
A beautiful poem, mam! Beautiful depiction of the dawn. Nyc imagery! A classical style. Somewhat like Coleridge while narrating the tale and depicting. i loved and enjoyed reading. i would be lucky to get your poetic remark on my Hindi Ghazal.