Dawn Broke In Silence Comments

wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, thank you for sharing 10/10

You conjure up clear images in my mind. Your choice of four and five lines stanzas I find interesting. Most free form writing I find reads choppily. You do not use meter nor yet rhyme in your well written poetic prose and yet i flows quites moothly

The night rules as much as the day rules! What a meaningful poem!

Hi michale; This is really a beautiful poem describing nature through one day. Dawn could also be the dawn of a new life or a new happy event. Taking you for sharing.

his day has come to its end and night blankets the view Beautuful imagery throughout your poem of the day.

YOU HAVE PAINTED A LOVELY PICTURE THROUGH YOUR POETIC LINES! - Raj