Dawn Beaches Of The City Of Tijuana Comments

Nice one jim keep writing

Dude (she said like a true Californian) - this is a rockin' piece of poetry. I am enjoying reading you this morning, over coffee, while nagchampa spirals in the air.

The last four lines of the fifth stanza draw my sympathy. I wish they are read by the party concerned.

whoa deep its like i want to go but then i think about history, i love it