Sunday, July 4, 2010

Dawn Comments

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Just a while ago a black cow gave birth to a white calf
Dawn, smooth, soft and balmy
Smile of child bloom in dewdrops
Leaves and grass bathe in the shower
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Binoy Barman
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 July 2010

Birth of Golden Dawn and White Calf are well blended with imageries of, ‘Ripples of river prepare for works of a new day’…excellent poeming … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Beautiful! The poetic imagery is stunning. My kind of poetry! Well done; D Have a similar one, Awakening.

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