Tuesday, June 6, 2006

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The room completely empty
My heart completely full
Like swimming in the sea
I finally feel free
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Elizabeth Castleberry
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Ernestine Northover 06 June 2006

A pleasant three rhyming poem, very well constructed and a pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX

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