Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dawn came early and bright and yet it does not lighten my burden
I reach out from this damaged place inside of me
To fill the empty space you left in me
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Kristeta von Popper
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Sameer Ahmed 29 January 2009

A good poem ingrained with truthful emotions and a little melancholic trance which you are into........the imagery of dawn is beautiful.............10/10 Warm Regards Sameer

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Filled with feeling and grounded with growth. Keep writing.

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