Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Light reveals the one,
in its manifold wonders,
in its magnificent hues.
The infatuating darkness,
...
Read full text

Sarvesh Kulkarni
COMMENTS
Miriam Maia Padua 12 January 2009

wow.! ! ....you create such wonderful words into a wonderful poetry... with vivid picture of the beauty of dawn...like a painting in front of me... i was bewildered by the beauty of your work... .i like the way how you put the negative words into it to create an amazing piece as a whole... a beautiful dawn...a beautiful new day.... 10++++++++++++++++

0 0 Reply
Pooja Ladyluck 23 December 2008

b'ful.........as always i repeat ma words again and again for each poem........well.......it got me thinkin.....deep........the experssions r amazing.......thanx! ! !

0 0 Reply
Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2008

liked the choice of your adjectives...

0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 17 December 2008

yes your poem reminds me of mine Sound of Silence--- The morning dawns, with the pellucid rosy tint on the buds, The rustle of the perfunctory cool breeze, . awakens the birds and the bees. A nice cool one Sarvesh certainly a ++++++10 anjali

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success