Dawn! Comments

castle of my dreams - has now crumbeld. Ah! Look! A Ray of Light liked these lines in ur poem. dawn symbolizes hope.. nice

beautiful poem madam.. and the way it unfolds towards brightness from the dark is superb.. well done.. regards prashant

A nice reflection of positivity....! ! Amen... let dawn always shine...

A nice reflection of positivity....! ! Amen... let dawn always shine...

This poem will increasingly dawn on people. The demand for controlling the commanding heights will grow. The difficulties one meets, will resolve by themselves with advancements. One should always proceed and light will dawn with shine and increasing clearness on ones paths.....

a very inspiring poem! ! ! ! ! !

Every night scares Every dawn dares A feeling felt within every 24 hour cycle Its a great feeling, a nice realisation Its nice, you brought it into PH. Good one. Enjoyed the read.

sure.highly optimistic and positive.inspiring.posted 10 surya

this one is so very beautiful..nice imagery indeed..thanks..10++

Daring write every thought of it expressed what is true people become confuse talk much but understand little it is wise to understand self first!

a brilliant beacon of poetic light..10+

Oh this night is so scary and dark It is gnawing my vitals like a shark But dawn is about the embark soon my life will be filled with joyous sparks............ Good Work..............

this held a ending I did not expect. written very well. good job. Crystal

the light is on...melting away the darkness...the knowledge and the ignorance...good piece, Deepti...metaphorical 10