Dawn Comments

Wow this poem was written to perfection

Dawn Redefined and Redawned… Nice metaphor…shower of delight 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

What an enchanting read, Subroto! One of your best. A lyrical, lively and cleverly constructed tribute to nature's daily herald. Love this one! Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Your lovely poem inspires one to appreciate nature and all the good things in life that are gifted freely. I love the way you write! 'Dawn' is a gem of rare beauty and so are you! Namaste' 10+++

Thanks for the comments you made in my poem. Its an honor to know a peot whose poem rings figures of speech with some poetic devices. rated 10+++, Thanks

dawn wonderfully portrayed in dis piece.. nice penned.

Lovely poem with beautiful imagery! ...morning sky painted red..., nips my pillow with a sweep... It must feel really good to wake up in the early hours of dawn with such pleasant thoughts.

a very wonderful poem... lovely thoughts flowing... i love this.. a very beautiful picture of love... a splendid image of a beautiful dawn.. 10++++

A lovely lyrical poem! Many would love to have that 'mooching' experience when they are awake and not in sleep! 10++ -Raj Nandy

wondefull imagination and write.voted 10 surya

'And thus I see her every day, Like watching Nature’s grandest play. And sometimes when I’m fast asleep, She nips my pillow with a sweep! ' Amazing composition,10++