Saturday, September 27, 2008

Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

DAWN
Passing through the silvery layers,
The dawn is approaching,
Dust, mist and fog,
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dr. ram sharma
fog
COMMENTS
Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

beauty in simplicity! very nice indeed!

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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

wow....this is soooooo beautiful

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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2008

Your poem blends the descriptive with the philosophical - very prettily. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 September 2008

clarion call of cuckoo. the wish i could heaer it ram. dawn the trees filter sunlight and bird song

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