The dawn that day rose
Just as the mist of the night
Subsided like a foam descending
To reveal clear water ahead
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So nice is the dawn, I enjoyed the flow of words that made it remarkable.
I like the flow and metre of this poem and it is penned with maturity of thought too.... a very good first attempt and worth every one of the ten I am giving it...10 evey best wish for future writing from Fay...
'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized your power in the miror of my mind' Lovely lines of a nice poem.