Friday, June 12, 2009

Dawn Comments

Rating: 4.0

The dawn that day rose
Just as the mist of the night
Subsided like a foam descending
To reveal clear water ahead
...
Read full text

pablo picasso
COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 12 May 2014

'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized your power in the miror of my mind' Lovely lines of a nice poem.

1 0 Reply
Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nice poem Mr Picasso

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 22 September 2009

So nice is the dawn, I enjoyed the flow of words that made it remarkable.

2 1 Reply
premji premji 13 June 2009

beautiful dawn.. welcome to poemhunter

2 1 Reply
Fay Slimm 12 June 2009

I like the flow and metre of this poem and it is penned with maturity of thought too.... a very good first attempt and worth every one of the ten I am giving it...10 evey best wish for future writing from Fay...

2 1 Reply
Close
Error Success