Saturday, November 17, 2007

Dawn Comments

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Somewhere in the darkness,
though I have tried I lost your
love. Growing colder, the
passion of the past can never
...
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David Blake
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Very beautiful poem

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Well David, this is a very beautifuly written - a piece of a real poetry :) I hope you'll see hope with every dawn.

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Theodora Onken 17 November 2007

Ah, David, i so identify with this one. Been in the same situation, and it is horrible. Love your poetry, as it is coming straight from your heart! Theo

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