Thursday, September 6, 2007

Dawn Comments

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Greeting the red dawn
she weaves a headdress of fire-
each flame is a weakness,
a flaw in the glass
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Michael Ardizzone
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Coll B. Lue 06 September 2007

I love the way you use the image of a fiery red dawn and the comparison of a lover who appears equally as energising in the way her hair resembles the redness of the early morning light as her hair reflects this as she moves. A very colourful and evocative write. Coll

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