Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Dawn Comments

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Alas night brings forth the dawn
The daylight shouts that tis morn
And aching limbs steal forth from bed
First tiresome bod then aching head
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Don Pengilly
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Fay Slimm 23 December 2009

The feel of this verse brings the reader through with a good flow of energy from working life until retirement. It comes to everyone sooner or later Don and your warm poem voices this well....10 and seasonal greetings from Fay.

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