Thursday, August 23, 2007

Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting at my desk in the half-light,
watching in the stillness
as the sky brightens for the coming day.
Everywhere there are mouths wide open
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David Harris
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Duncan Wyllie 30 August 2007

Moving slowly but with a compassionate veiw from your window, excellent sentiments As I sit in wonderment, a new day awakes outside my window; petals unfurl to meet the sun. The calling of birds getting ready Brilliant David Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

Yes indeed David, keep onwards and upwards, that's what we need to do. A lovely rendering of a morning half asleep and a morning half awake. I find it hard to shake myself awake in the mornings, I'm no lark! Lovely write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Theodora Onken 23 August 2007

Undedningly delightful David, a real gem! Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 August 2007

I love the dawn, there is some thing magical about it..

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