Dawn Comments

Nice one speakings to Loving things!

longing can be elastic at times, nice words Munuswamy

Nice, neat play on words that is both sweet and satisfying to my poetic appetite!

In my longing for DAWN.... The DAWN itself will disappear! ! this is symbolic writing........ longing and the realization that it will disappear. does it denote happiness or sadness dear poetess..? ?

Hi Saraswathy, All through our lives, we long for things, not knowing that they are so short-lived. Many things we cherish to possess disappear, before we have even possessed it, like dawn. The sense of loss and void they create in our hearts are much bigger than our longing itself. Fantastic observation and exquisite imagery that make the poem extra-ordinary. Thanks for sharing.

We do not always get what we long for. Nice poem.

I am also like you! ! Great mind! Nice piece of work.

nice poem... we wait for something knowing that it will also disappear...

Superb.Thanks for sharing.

Dawn dawns the light on everybody......nicely expressed..

This poem is to depict the longing of a newly married woman, if she didn't bear a baby within one or two years, the society will look at her as a barren land, every person questions her, gives advice, suggestions, especially the mom in law pokes her wild nose into the bedroom, so longing for a baby, prolongs means it could be a reflection of that woman's pain to see the dawn that is to become a mother, so this dawn is fir that, depends on the problem we face it could as well!

little stars longing for dawnnnnnn. do they really long for dawn. i would like to remain in the starry world to be romantic and to love. moon, stars...... love, eros, romance thank you. you have a doctorate? ?

fantastic poem thanks for sharing

fantastic poem thanks for sharing

i long for the dawn. yes after a dark night we all long for a dawn. thank you dear poetess. Dev

thks' read some of yours, good flow, with longings and desires, keep rocking

Nice! ! Short and sweet! Enjoyed! !

In my longing for DAWN.... The DAWN itself will disappear! ! literary and philsophical, nice thinking. want to read more of your poems thank you. tony

Oh, this an awesome Poem, thank you for sharing it with us.