Friday, December 11, 2015

Dawn. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw infinity the other day.
I stepped outside this aimless place
of unfulfilled desires.
I was apart from time.
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Ripper Jones
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 January 2016

i saw infinity the other day. the verses you begin with is already marvelous. like the poem very much. it is a very good meditation. thank you. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 December 2015

Excellent flight of imagery displayed in this beautiful poem with a spiritual base. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Emily Krauss 11 December 2015

I really enjoyed reading this poem

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Emily Krauss 11 December 2015

I really enjoyed reading your poem.

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