Dawn Comments

if any subject deserved an endless number of poems written about it. I submit it would Have to Be the Likes of the Sunrise, and its only Competitor would be the Likes of the Sunset.

She opened her eyes and Kissed the sleeping world Hard work leads to peace and pride When my eyes still behold This beautiful precious sight... it i s the sense of beauty that is the foundation of poetic thinking. you had it very early in your life. let us thank God who is Beauty in itself. God gave you that great poetic gift. thank you. you emphasize the necessity to do hard work to achieve poetic heights. thank you

Seema, I see that you were a full grown poet even at the age of twelve! You can easily add many more feathers to your cap! Greatly enjoyed this serene morning scene! A 10