Dawn Comments

liquid sun metaphor at its best form

Amazing poem.......What a way to start a fresh day, a kiss by loved ones.............No venture will fail till the dusk with the prefect dose of morning kiss 10+++.

Wonderful silence lies on pillow of night is humorous amazingly. Very deep imagery is drawn here with images of sun and morning and hope, . Nice sharing...10

Lovely write! Silence of the night laying on the pillow and waking up to greet the dawn! Very imaginative! Enjoyed the poem Sanjukta!