Thursday, January 31, 2013

Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

With midnight far behind and gleams increase,
And sunrise hints of slowly breaking out,
The night decided to soon end its lease,
As now alarmed roosters begin to shout
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Maggie Munro 18 February 2013

Easy form and a fine balance of light and dark. Very nice.

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Valsa George 18 February 2013

'But promises that live on tomorrows, Do gild each dawn with lustrous hopes and dreams'.....Beautiful lines! ! Enjoyed the poem and thanks for the comment! !

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