Thursday, August 1, 2013

Dawn! Comments

Rating: 3.7

Memories dawn on me
at the nightfall, have you seen
where's gone the darkness?
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Shahzia Batool
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Saadat Tahir 05 August 2013

Ah....the after glow of lost loved ones beautifully depicted.... a bit ironic and dark in its effect....nicely penned well conceived with great compression liked blessings

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Yasmin Khan 03 August 2013

The darkness is lightened by memories' glow, I enjoyed this write brief but beautiful write

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David Wood 03 August 2013

The night soon evaporates into a new dawn where all we have left are our memories.

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Heather Wilkins 02 August 2013

dawn is just around the corner. darkness will only last a short while. good write Shahzia

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R.j. Wynn 02 August 2013

Interesting dream of yours.

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Neela Nath Das 02 August 2013

Very cute and deep.You can do it easily.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 August 2013

Dawn of memories drive away the darkness of thoughtless state. Beautiful poem.

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Poet's Fan 02 August 2013

there can not be a better poem than this composed in a few words and thought-provoking-a-volume, thanx

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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

dawn comes to dispel the darkness. memories are like mirror.beautiful write

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2013

Wow beautiful poem..Short and sweet and loved reading it.

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Wahab Abdul 01 August 2013

sweet memories dispel the darness to a world where there is only happiness... love this poem, too... aw

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